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Visions from San Francisco Bay

By Czeslaw Milosz

Book Review by Arthur Quinn
1983

 

Czeslaw Milosz' Vision from San Francisco Bay --- a collection of essays first published in Polish in 1969, almost a decade after he arrived at Berkeley --- has been the most neglected of his works translated since he receive the Nobel Prize for Literature in 1980. At first glance this neglect is surprising, for this book will be for most American readers the best introduction to Milosz' work as a whole. Here, in a series of short, clear essays, Milosz presents more plainly than anywhere else his view of the human condition. But it is precisely this view of the human condition that explains the neglect Milosz' vision of our predicament is enough to make any comfortable reader wince.

To be sure, Visions from San Francisco Bay was widely reviewed. And all the reviews I read were positive, respectful, sometimes enthusiastic, always full of good cheer. It was the good cheer that got to me. The review in the San Francisco Chronicle liked the book because in it one could learn the Great Man's response to highways, underground newspapers, sidewalk preachers, supermarkets. Reading that review was like watching Milosz himself be trimmed and put under cellophane for supermarket display, somewhere between the capers and fresh salmon.

The best of the reviews --- and a careful, intelligent review it was --- bore the title "The Devil and Mr. Milosz." But here was that good cheer again, the demonic voices evoked by Milosz rechanneled to sound amusing, as if from George Bernard Shaw or The Screwtape Letters. Milosz was being neglected with attention.

Visions from San Francisco Bay itself offers a description and explanation of this strange process, with respect not to Milosz himself but rather to the great California poet Robinson Jeffers. Milosz believes that Jeffers failed to be taken seriously by his contemporaries because he tried to break through "the invisible web of censorship." "One must recall that he was neglected by people who placed great value on meat, alcohol, comfortable houses, luxurious cars, and tolerated words as if they were harmless hobbies."

Make Milosz' work a mere exercise in autobiographical expression; make it an intriguing commentary on the vagaries of 20th-century history; make it a convenient opportunity to express ringing support for Solidarity; or to praise the remarkable range in modern poetry; but when Milosz says that the demonic is at the core of contemporary life, when he asserts that the highest function of disclosure is exorcism, or that poets should pray that "good spirits, not evil ones, choose us for their instruments" --- well, then he must be speaking figuratively. It would be indecorous to take him at his word. Such a way of talking must be for so sophisticated, so sensitive, so accomplished a man only a harmless hobby.

Visions from San Francisco Bay could have been the title of one of those lovely coffee books, produced by the Sierra Club, perhaps filled with Ansel Adams-style photographs of early paradise. Milosz, in fact, does have much praise for the western American landscape. Yet he praises it while at the same time confessing that he finds "something oppressive in the virginity of this country." Milosz praises beautiful landscapes for making him experience oppression.

The hostile beauty of the earth is central to Visions from San Francisco Bay. In Death Valley, or the Sierra, or in a redwood forest where eagles circle above chasms of mist, Milosz sees an alien, inhuman place, a place in itself neither good nor bad, however tempted we might be to find comfort in its apparent beauty.

The European landscape can easily be imagined as humane, as but a stage for human strivings, shaped by human values. The American West does not permit such comforting delusions. "Both here on the West Coast, and elsewhere in America, one is faced with something that is impossible to define by allusions to the 'humanistically formed imagination,' something incomprehensible in regard both to the forms taken in by the eye and to the connection those forms have to the lives of human beings."

If we wince at being told that, Milosz assures us he winces as well. Nonetheless, he insists that in this discomfort we are coming close to the heart of the European immigrant experience so often romanticized. In leaving their homeland, the immigrants had, if unwillingly, broken through the cocoon of constantly renewed interdependencies that had shielded them from the world in itself. In America they could for the first time see it for what it was, in and of itself, an alien and indifferent thing. They could taste "the elixir of pure alienation" and in their loneliness understand the human condition.

Or this at least seems to have been Milosz' own experience. "Now I seel shelter in these pages, but my humanistic zeal has been weakened by the mountains and the ocean, by those moments when I have upon the boundless immensities with a feeling akin to nausea, the wind ravaging my little homestead of hope and intentions."

But Milosz himself, like any human being, and unlike the impersonal chaos called nature, cannot and will not dispense with valuation. an indifferent universe, indifferent in itself, is to him an evil universe. He finds precedence for this dark conclusion in the old Manichean heresy which taught the little good in this world was trapped there as if in exile, yearning for escape. And this conclusion Milosz finds empirically confirmed not just in the horrors of modern history but in the teachings of modern evolutionary biology.

"Obviously the struggle with Evil in the Universe is an old one . . . .  Yet, never was the position of those who defend the idea of a hidden harmony more difficult, never was Manichean ferocity more aggressive than when the nineteenth century observed that the suffering of living matter is the mainspring of its Movement and that the individual creature is sacrificed in the name of a splendid and enormous transformation without goal of purpose."

Some species rise, others fall, as do human families, and nations, and whole civilizations. There may well be an internal logic to these transformations, a logic which when viewed from sufficient distance has its own elegance, harmony, grace. And our reason tempts us to be enthralled by this superhuman splendor; but when so enthralled we find difficult to remember, except perhaps as an element of an abstract calculus, the millions of individuals, the millions upon millions, who unwillingly paid for this splendor in pain and blood.

The call of nature --- survival of the fittest --- and the call of history --- the strong do what they will, the weak what they must --- are a single song, a siren song that would have us lose our sense of "dread and repugnance for the impersonal cruelty built into the structure of the universe." And this song governs our world.

Hell is the subjection of the human, of the personal to the impersonal, of the living to the dead, of the concrete to the abstract. In Hell the elemental wonder at mere existence is lost; everything becomes a case, an instance, a symptom. And so we must not mistake philosophy and science for allies in our struggle against the inhuman. There by their very nature attempt to reduce the world to a bloodless ballet of categories.

For him philosophical systems are only worth studying "in order to dismiss them." And science? "Had I a liking for the sciences, perhaps only a sociology which examines the self-confident social sciences would satisfy me. Fortunately, I do not, for I would then have used the grab of a scientific shaman to conceal my own preferences and biases."

And what of the great achievements of technology, which at least in its benign applications has alleviated human sufferings and otherwise made human beings less dependent upon the vicissitudes of impersonal nature? About even these achievements Milosz has deep doubts. He suggest that these could well be the subtlest ploy of the demonic. "The greatest trick of this continent's demons, their leisurely vengeance, consists in surrendering nature, recognizing that it could not be defended; but in place of nature there arose a civilization which to its members appears to be Nature itself, endowed with nearly all the features of that other nature."

Technology itself now dwarfs the individual into inconsequence, and far more effectively because now he is being dwarfed by what appear to be the products of his own collectivity. And we feel reduced to "impotence, evasion, a solitude with phonograph music and a fire in the fireplace." Unless, that is, we are willing to assert what seems absurd, both to others and to ourselves.

We must assert the primacy of the living, the concrete, the personal, however vulnerable, ephemeral, of inconsequential seem to our mind's eye. Milosz prefers to see the continent in this way, as a concrete thing. And he claims to offer this vision only as his personal preference. He does not hope to prove his preferences, because proof always involve abstractions, an the devil will always win at his own game. But Milosz can continue to assert unyieldingly, against the devil and the devil's syllogisms, his own preference. Even at the risk of embarrassing the reader and himself. Even by his persistent use of the outmoded language of demonology.

If the world sacrifices the individual with apparent indifference, if reality seems governed by abstract laws, who is responsible for this travesty? There must be persons behind this -- concrete, living persons who are devoted to deluding us. And these persons have traditionally been called evil spirits.

Milosz will always strive to speak in the language of the concrete, the personal. He speaks the language of poetry, the language of the essay. "The only thing we can do is communicate with one another." To communicate our concrete presence, our uniqueness, to love one another. And thereby to help one another resist the seductive voices of the demonic. "Whenever I take up my pen which itself pretends to knowledge, since language is composed of affirmations and negations, I treat that act only as the exorcism of the evil spirits of the present."

Left to itself, language will pretend to knowledge, reduce the concrete to propositions. And hence it must be handled with a certain sense of danger. Language is a contradiction, at once sound and idea --- as are human beings, at once person and body. And so Milosz will begin his poem, "As Poetica?": "I have always aspired to a more spacious form/ that would be free from the claims of poetry or pros/ and would let us understand each other without exposing the author or reader to sublime agonies." Such a communication of individuality, or uniqueness, is not possible except through the meditation of a language full of claims. The communication can be achieved only by turning this language against itself, by self-contradiction, by the sublime agony of attempting to transcend language itself. There is no art of poetry except on that ends in a question mark. And the only poem Milosz has written in praise of reason is called "An Incantation."

So much of culture, so much of the invisible web of censorship, is devoted to masking "man's fundamental duality." To mask the duality and thereby free people from the necessity of choice. Milosz' work is devoted to unmaking that duality, to making his readers admit the contradictory nature of their own experience. For Milosz, no less than for Simone Weil, "Contradiction is the instrument of transcendence."

Contradiction forces us to choose, assert our preferences, to make an "arbitrary choice, not subject to verification." We must recognize that we are living within the contradiction; it is not a "background against which to play out our tragicomedies." Our personalism, our humanism, if such we choose, will scarcely be comforting. It will be a "piety without a home," a piety that allows "fortunately no safe superiority." (Superiority would come only if we knew we were right.) Perhaps this half-ironic piety is best summarized in the title of the essay: "An Essay in Which the Author Confesses That He is on the Side of Man, for lack of Anything Better."

Actually he also confesses he is on the side of God. Who presumably is a bit better. But Milosz' God is not the God of philosophers or theologians. "I desire a God who would love me and help me, who would save me from the nothingness of death, to whom I could each day render homage and gratitude. God should have a beard and stroll in heavenly pastures." Only a thoroughly anthropomorphic religion can "resist the exact sciences which annihilate the individual."

H J J J J

Now I must confess. In presenting the summary of Visions which you have just read I have violated the spirit of the book, and perhaps even served the demons. Better to neglect the work of Milosz altogether than to present it as an easily communicable system of ideas.

To say that the choice for Milosz is a choice between abstract and the concrete, between logic and contradiction, is to state the choice wrongly, for it is to state it in abstract terms. The choice for Milosz is never between ideas, world views, philosophies; it is rather always between persons. At the cosmic level Milosz may think the choice is between a bearded God and sophisticated demon. But in the small world of Vision from San Francisco Bay it is a choice between Milosz himself and the great, neglected Robinson Jeffers.

Jeffers was in his way as unyielding as Milosz. He saw essentially the same contradictions as Milosz, the same dualities at the heart of human experience --- and saw, too, the absolute necessity of choice. Jeffers just chose contrarily, and celebrated the impersonal. Jeffers' God was pure motion. and he seemed to consider consciousness itself an unforgivable flaw.

Jeffers wrote in the language of poetry, a language which when understood forces dialogue. And so Milosz, as he wandered Monterey and wondered at this fellow poet's life, found himself forced into dialogue. The result was "To Robinson Jeffers, " the only poem in Visions from San Francisco Bay and its centerpiece.

Milosz addresses the alien Jeffers, the dread but somehow still present Jeffers: "If you have not read the Slavic poets,/ so much the better. There is nothing there for a Scotch-Irish wanderer to seek." And he describes the forbidding world Jeffers praises: "Prayers are not heard . . . Basalt and granite./ Above them a bird of prey. The only beauty." And having conjured up such an overwhelming presence, he doubts: "What have I to do with you?" and even seems to despair: "Oh, consolations of mortals, creeds futile!" But he finally finds within himself the power, although qualified, although momentary, to contradict:

And yet you do not know what I know.
     The earth teaches
more than does the nakedness of
     elements. No one with
          impunity
gives himself the eyes of a god . . . .
Better to carve suns and moons on
     the joints of crosses
as was done in my district. To birches
     and firs
give feminine names. To implore
     protection
against the mute and treacherous might
than to proclaim as you did, an inhuman
     thing.

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Quinn, Arthur. "Books: Visions from San Francisco Bay, by Czeslaw Milosz."
     California Monthly. 03, No. 6 (June-July 1983), pp. 12-13.

 

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